GAIA
Administrator
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Post by GAIA on Jan 16, 2019 8:06:26 GMT -5
Hello everyone.
First and foremost, thank you for your patience towards the launch of our inaugural show. I understand the delay would be frustrating or discouraging, but I intend to get on the ball with the next one. This, again, is my first time attempting to write a show in it's entirety, it has proven to be more work than expected but I hope it was worth the delay.
With that said, I encourage people to be open with their opinion on the show and have decided to make a thread for it. What did you like? What didn't you like? What needs improvement with the show? Go as in-depth as you like, it will not go ignored. We can only get better from here, and it starts with you guys and what you guys think.
Thank you very much, have a good day!
Much love,
Finnegan Wakefield.
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Post by azurinevebbins on Jan 16, 2019 11:52:41 GMT -5
First and foremost, I'm extremely happy this show was posted. Wondered a couple of times if the whole thing might've been too ambitious. However, when viewing the broadcast in its entirety it was well worth the wait. My lone nitpick is that the ring announcer seemed to repeat during the opening contest. Of course, that technical difficulty could be nerves from it being the first match. Still, I'm looking forward to promoting the second show when a card is announced. Helps knowing my work is appreciated when reading a compelling and competitive match.
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Havoc
VANGUARD Wrestler
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Post by Havoc on Jan 16, 2019 13:06:15 GMT -5
I really felt that the show was worth the wait. As for the difficulties faced leading up to it, there's not much that could have been done about it. Real life problems always come first. But I am glad that VANGUARD is finally up and running. I would say, a good first successful show is now in the books with it only getting better from now. Looking forward to working here with everybody involved! Let's have fun and make memorable stories! Cheers mate.
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DEV
VANGUARD Alumni
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Post by DEV on Jan 16, 2019 21:37:50 GMT -5
nigga, i can't read shit.
The show was worth the wait, mostly due to the people waiting for so long to get it. The matches were good. The aftermath is bound to be nice with the locker room brawl coming forth. Yet, the formatting leaves much to be desired. I had to zoom in something serious to be able to see the text. Also, some colorization might make getting through the show a little easier. For a first show, it did its job well of getting storylines on the table as well giving the readers and writers something to sink their teeth into.
OVERALL GRADE: B
Pros:
- Matches were well-written under the pretense that the writers were probably getting used to the characters.
- The little blue border around the show was nice.
- The locker room brawl at the end of the show was a nice way to establish the identity of the company.
Cons:
- The formatting.
- Be careful with how you present certain characters.
- It's understandable that the show is late but the first show being late doesn't set the best precedent. In addition to that, it may make the company lose the momentum that it needs.
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GAIA
Administrator
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Post by GAIA on Jan 16, 2019 22:03:27 GMT -5
I do have to apologize for the formatting. I was planning to do more to it but with how late the show was getting I wanted it to be out there asap. I also have a very wide monitor, so I am not always sure how it will look for others screens. It will be better prepared next time around.
I appreciate the feedback !
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